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Executive officer's Personal Log: Stardate 60701.2. Commander Amanda Cavendish recording.
   Damn, damn, damn, damn, DAMN!
   I'm trying too hard, I'm sure of it. But I worry that the damage is already done. Behaviour like this, the rigid, inflexible chain of command... It worked on the Potemkin. But that was years ago, and a different situation. This isn't a warship. This is Starfleet doing what Starfleet does. And I'm taking out my anger on someone just 'cause she happens to have fiddled DNA. It's not like it's her fault. The  experiments were generations ago.
   But each time I see Chief Orlova, I just remember the ravages done to my species during the Eugenics wars, when it was believed our... weaponry... was the key to defeating the western world. A built in biological agent. And Khan's forces almost wiped us out trying to work out how to replicate it.
   The historical parallels are too close, even though the program was a peaceful one. Almost an issue of civil liberties- it was their right to change their bodies as they chose- but... agh.
   Who's to stop their ancestors from making the same choices Khan did four hundred years ago?
   I'm going to try to like Chief Orlova, I really am. But... I'm not perfect. Nobody is. Even Kirk got demoted. The Augments just get a little too close for my liking. When your parents, your parents' parents, your ancestors deliberately choose to remove these imperfections, these flaws from your genes it seems like an easy ride. And I don't believe in easy rides. I've not had one.<
***
   Why was it that you'd always get woken up the moment you'd just drifted off to sleep? Amanda swore at the comm alarm, groggily rising from the bed and checking the time. 1645. Two hours' nap. Bloody diurnals and their 'sensible' waking hours. She tapped at the comm panel, knowing she'd have a better chance of advanced calculus than finding her comm-badge in this state. And she was rubbish at advanced calculus.
   "Cavendish. What's the problem?"
   "Sorry to interrupt your rest, ma'am," came the reply, a Terran, certainly. Indian, from the sounds of the accent. He'd probably picked up on the fact Amanda'd been sleeping from her tone of voice. "We just received communications from the Bainbridge which warped in-system an hour ago. Admiral Tarav wants to come aboard. He says he needs to talk to the ship's commanding officer."
   "Well why don't you talk to the ship's... Oh. Hell."
   "The captain's not due to arrive for a few days, ma'am. And since you're the assigned exec-"
   "I know, I know, chain of command. Thank you, mister..."
   "Chandra, ma'am.  Ensign Mahanamaraputhani Tharamaisalan Chandra."
   Amanda groaned under her breath. "Thank you, mister Chandra. Tell the Admiral I won't be more than fifteen minutes. I'll meet him in Transporter Room Two. Assemble what senior staff we have so far."
   "I'll do that. Chandra out."
   That was all she needed. A notoriously officious, belligerent Tellarite admiral turning up to fiddle with the ship's workings. If she ever made Captain, Amanda would make sure she stayed as far away from inspection tours as possible. Time to engage in the gentle art of brown-muzzling.
***
The USS Bainbridge, NCC-82164, slowly, gracefully drew up alongside 11586's smaller, more utilitarian hull. A large, sleek, Excalibur-class battleship built and deployed with the intent of being a one-on-one match for the Jem'Hadar capital ships, her one thousand and eighty-six metre length glistened with portholes and viewports, RCS clusters dotted around the dreadnought's extremities venting occasionally as it righted itself into parallel relative alignment with the Excelsior-class medium cruiser. It was a sheer clash of ideologies between the two ships, and a sign of changing times in the history of the Federation.
   11586, a eighty-year-old cruiser, designed and built in the optimistic days of the post-Khitomer peace, a science vessel first and foremost, replete with sensor packages and diplomatic facilities, designed with Starfleet's Primary Mission- to explore strange new worlds, seek out new life and new civilisations, as Jim Kirk had so succinctly summarised the original forty-page document- clearly in mind. And in appearance she represented the old days too. Lacking the sheer classic elegance of its contemporary Constitution-class heavy cruisers (The Excelsiors had been designated Dreadnought too upon their creation, and subsequently downgraded as newer, bigger classes were constructed), it was a well-proportioned but spartan design, designed to handle intense hull stresses that had been predicted during the initial transwarp computer tests as far back as the 2250s, with the oversized nacelles and 'pregnant' engineering hull characteristic of its class.
   Bainbridge was new, impressive, and according to some of the 'old guard' admiralty, an abomination, unworthy of the fleet for one simple reason: the Excaliburs were built to fight. Like the Akira, Defiant or Reagan classes, science and exploration were very much secondary. The Federation had needed, critically, ships dedicated to its defence when the 2360s turned into the 2370s. Wolf 359 had shown that sticking to your tricorders when there were races and cultures out there that couldn't- or, more terrifyingly, that wouldn't- respond to the Federation's diplomatic preferences would result in massive losses of vessels and life.
   39 ships were eliminated in six minutes on New Year's Eve, 2366. Two hundred and eighty-six the next time the Borg arrived, in 2373. And then, the war broke out. Although a few ships were built for fighting by then, they were mostly a curiosity. Defiant was almost unique, her class consisting of a mere four vessels at the outbreak of the war.
   The Akiras were regarded as more specialist evacuation and survey ships, their large shuttlebay with its complement of thirty-six shuttles, runabouts and other small craft filling a survey-and-mapping niche originally filled by the Roykirk-class in the 2320s and 30s. When war broke out, it was easy to set them up as a truly fearsome carrier group flagship. Three squadrons of Peregrines, Valkyries or Thunderbolts, a specialist probe-launching pod that needed absolutely no conversion at all to fire photon torpedoes instead, and a long-range sensor array that was perfectly good at finding ships anyway. By war's end in '81, they were the two most numerous classes in Starfleet after the ubiquitous, popular and hardy little Sabre-class frigate.
   Which was all very well and good, but the war was now over. Meaning Starfleet had suffered the condition organisations such as itself were prone to after protracted combat periods. It had over-armed. There were simply too many warships in the fleet.
   Some of this was easy to rectify; two thirds of the Akira class simply reverted to their original mission, cutting their torpedo tubes down from the wartime fifteen to a more reasonable six, and reducing to only a single fighter squadron. The remaining third, a hundred and nineteen vessels, would keep their armament, and be officially reclassified as some sort of 'hazardous sector patrol/survey through-deck ballistic cruiser'. Which was a record for the longest official ship classification Starfleet had ever used.
   The Defiants were harder to fix. Some went into policing duties, some convoy escorts, most into specific system defense, a few redesignated as flagship escorts (After the high-profile 'sniping' of several famous and decorated admirals who'd simply gone from one place to another taking only their personal command- resulting in the loss of twenty-two admirals or commodores, fourteen thousand lives and nineteen Galaxy, Sovereign or Norway class vessels- all designated flagships were now required to have a small destroyer or frigate screen for defensive duties) and a small few including the second Defiant were actually used in scientific missions.
   Which still left a big gap in Starfleet's science and exploration resources. With the Gamma Quadrant effectively under occupation since the collapse of the Dominion, the Federation had a lot of ground to cover, and, more importantly, an entire quadrant of the galaxy to map, catalogue and check for potential allies, threats or curiosities. It was as much a public relations exercise- a 'let's get back to exploration!' vibe on the back of seven years of fighting and death- as a scientific crusade, but having a good nose around needed no excuse.

[Edit- Removed references to Vares.  Unless Nadenka had gone to a non-Federation world and joined one of the bodymodding communities, she has nothing to do with Vares.   She may have some tweaked genes being the decendant of a specialty breed that may have participated in the Eugenics wars, if her ancestors didn't do anything outside the range of Terran genetics.  If they had they'd either have been sterilized or back engineered to remove all traces depending of the severity.  I also fixed a misspelling or two.  -Aspera
******
Executive officer's Personal Log: Stardate 60701.2. Commander Amanda Cavendish recording.
   Damn, damn, damn, damn, DAMN!
   I'm trying too hard, I'm sure of it. But I worry that the damage is already done. Behaviour like this, the rigid, inflexible chain of command... It worked on the Potemkin. But that was years ago, and a different situation. This isn't a warship. This is Starfleet doing what Starfleet does. And I'm taking out my anger on someone just 'cause she happens to have fiddled DNA. It's not like it's her fault. The  experiments were generations ago.
   But each time I see Chief Orlova, I just remember the ravages done to my species during the Eugenics wars, when it was believed our... weaponry... was the key to defeating the western world. A built in biological agent. And Khan's forces almost wiped us out trying to work out how to replicate it.
   The historical parallels are too close, even though the program was a peaceful one. Almost an issue of civil liberties- it was their right to change their bodies as they chose- but... agh.
   Who's to stop their ancestors from making the same choices Khan did four hundred years ago?
   I'm going to try to like Chief Orlova, I really am. But... I'm not perfect. Nobody is. Even Kirk got demoted. The Augments just get a little too close for my liking. When your parents, your parents' parents, your ancestors deliberately choose to remove these imperfections, these flaws from your genes it seems like an easy ride. And I don't believe in easy rides. I've not had one.<
***
   Why was it that you'd always get woken up the moment you'd just drifted off to sleep? Amanda swore at the comm alarm, groggily rising from the bed and checking the time. 1645. Two hours' nap. Bloody diurnals and their 'sensible' waking hours. She tapped at the comm panel, knowing she'd have a better chance of advanced calculus than finding her comm-badge in this state. And she was rubbish at advanced calculus.
   "Cavendish. What's the problem?"
   "Sorry to interrupt your rest, ma'am," came the reply, a Terran, certainly. Indian, from the sounds of the accent. He'd probably picked up on the fact Amanda'd been sleeping from her tone of voice. "We just received communications from the Bainbridge which warped in-system an hour ago. Admiral Tarav wants to come aboard. He says he needs to talk to the ship's commanding officer."
   "Well why don't you talk to the ship's... Oh. Hell."
   "The captain's not due to arrive for a few days, ma'am. And since you're the assigned exec-"
   "I know, I know, chain of command. Thank you, mister..."
   "Chandra, ma'am.  Ensign Mahanamaraputhani Tharamaisalan Chandra."
   Amanda groaned under her breath. "Thank you, mister Chandra. Tell the Admiral I won't be more than fifteen minutes. I'll meet him in Transporter Room Two. Assemble what senior staff we have so far."
   "I'll do that. Chandra out."
   That was all she needed. A notoriously officious, belligerent Tellarite admiral turning up to fiddle with the ship's workings. If she ever made Captain, Amanda would make sure she stayed as far away from inspection tours as possible. Time to engage in the gentle art of brown-muzzling.
***
The USS Bainbridge, NCC-82164, slowly, gracefully drew up alongside 11586's smaller, more utilitarian hull. A large, sleek, Excalibur-class battleship built and deployed with the intent of being a one-on-one match for the Jem'Hadar capital ships, her one thousand and eighty-six metre length glistened with portholes and viewports, RCS clusters dotted around the dreadnought's extremities venting occasionally as it righted itself into parallel relative alignment with the Excelsior-class medium cruiser. It was a sheer clash of ideologies between the two ships, and a sign of changing times in the history of the Federation.
   11586, a eighty-year-old cruiser, designed and built in the optimistic days of the post-Khitomer peace, a science vessel first and foremost, replete with sensor packages and diplomatic facilities, designed with Starfleet's Primary Mission- to explore strange new worlds, seek out new life and new civilisations, as Jim Kirk had so succinctly summarised the original forty-page document- clearly in mind. And in appearance she represented the old days too. Lacking the sheer classic elegance of its contemporary Constitution-class heavy cruisers (The Excelsiors had been designated Dreadnought too upon their creation, and subsequently downgraded as newer, bigger classes were constructed), it was a well-proportioned but spartan design, designed to handle intense hull stresses that had been predicted during the initial transwarp computer tests as far back as the 2250s, with the oversized nacelles and 'pregnant' engineering hull characteristic of its class.
   Bainbridge was new, impressive, and according to some of the 'old guard' admiralty, an abomination, unworthy of the fleet for one simple reason: the Excaliburs were built to fight. Like the Akira, Defiant or Reagan classes, science and exploration were very much secondary. The Federation had needed, critically, ships dedicated to its defence when the 2360s turned into the 2370s. Wolf 359 had shown that sticking to your tricorders when there were races and cultures out there that couldn't- or, more terrifyingly, that wouldn't- respond to the Federation's diplomatic preferences would result in massive losses of vessels and life.
   39 ships were eliminated in six minutes on New Year's Eve, 2366. Two hundred and eighty-six the next time the Borg arrived, in 2373. And then, the war broke out. Although a few ships were built for fighting by then, they were mostly a curiosity. Defiant was almost unique, her class consisting of a mere four vessels at the outbreak of the war.
   The Akiras were regarded as more specialist evacuation and survey ships, their large shuttlebay with its complement of thirty-six shuttles, runabouts and other small craft filling a survey-and-mapping niche originally filled by the Roykirk-class in the 2320s and 30s. When war broke out, it was easy to set them up as a truly fearsome carrier group flagship. Three squadrons of Peregrines, Valkyries or Thunderbolts, a specialist probe-launching pod that needed absolutely no conversion at all to fire photon torpedoes instead, and a long-range sensor array that was perfectly good at finding ships anyway. By war's end in '81, they were the two most numerous classes in Starfleet after the ubiquitous, popular and hardy little Sabre-class frigate.
   Which was all very well and good, but the war was now over. Meaning Starfleet had suffered the condition organisations such as itself were prone to after protracted combat periods. It had over-armed. There were simply too many warships in the fleet.
   Some of this was easy to rectify; two thirds of the Akira class simply reverted to their original mission, cutting their torpedo tubes down from the wartime fifteen to a more reasonable six, and reducing to only a single fighter squadron. The remaining third, a hundred and nineteen vessels, would keep their armament, and be officially reclassified as some sort of 'hazardous sector patrol/survey through-deck ballistic cruiser'. Which was a record for the longest official ship classification Starfleet had ever used.
   The Defiants were harder to fix. Some went into policing duties, some convoy escorts, most into specific system defense, a few redesignated as flagship escorts (After the high-profile 'sniping' of several famous and decorated admirals who'd simply gone from one place to another taking only their personal command- resulting in the loss of twenty-two admirals or commodores, fourteen thousand lives and nineteen Galaxy, Sovereign or Norway class vessels- all designated flagships were now required to have a small destroyer or frigate screen for defensive duties) and a small few including the second Defiant were actually used in scientific missions.
   Which still left a big gap in Starfleet's science and exploration resources. With the Gamma Quadrant effectively under occupation since the collapse of the Dominion, the Federation had a lot of ground to cover, and, more importantly, an entire quadrant of the galaxy to map, catalogue and check for potential allies, threats or curiosities. It was as much a public relations exercise- a 'let's get back to exploration!' vibe on the back of seven years of fighting and death- as a scientific crusade, but having a good nose around needed no excuse.

[Edit- Removed references to Vares.  Unless Nadenka had gone to a non-Federation world and joined one of the bodymodding communities, she has nothing to do with Vares.   She may have some tweaked genes being the decendant of a specialty breed that may have participated in the Eugenics wars, if her ancestors didn't do anything outside the range of Terran genetics.  If they had they'd either have been sterilized or back engineered to remove all traces depending of the severity.  I also fixed a misspelling or two.  -Aspera]
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« Reply #1 on: June 27, 2009, 08:40:37 PM »

"Dunno what the Admiral wants with us," Chandra muttered, and Amanda was glad someone had said it. What passed for the ship's available senior staff was currently stood waiting in its only working transporter room, idling away the minutes until Admiral Tarav transported over from the Bainbridge.
   "We're in no fit condition to move out, we don't even have a warp core until tomorrow," Amanda replied calmly. "I doubt we're being shipped out just yet."
   "It's probably a crew rotation." Amanda hadn't met Major Dawson before, but the head of the ship's Marine Corps contingent seemed nice enough. Sensible, unflappable, if a little detached. The vixen rotated her shoulders a bit; evidently she'd been woken up as well.
   The others in the room were a collection of mostly beta-shift officers and crew, the ship's command staff mostly yet to arrive. Threycus, who Amanda had been less than thrilled to read was being assigned as the ship's permanent Operations Manager, was amongst them, but the Engineering section was excused due to having more pressing duties.
   Like getting 11586 actually working,
   "Or Starfleet deciding they don't need to recommission these old ships after all," Kemu Taril interjected with a hint of paranoia, "and rendering all this work we've done useless."
   "Let's not get paranoid, Kemu," Amanda said dryly, the feline Trill nodding at the comment.
   "Sorry, ma'am." he replied, as the blue shimmer of the Transporter began to fade into view on the pad.
   Three figures mateialised; the Tellarite admiral, his adjutant Pedersen, and a short, tiger-striped hyenid female from a species Amanada couldn't quite recall dressed in the little-used purple uniform of Starfleet's Diplomatic division.
   "Admiral Tarav," Amanda said to the flag officer, nodding to Pedersen.She'd met the Admiral's adjutant before, and she was glad for his presence; he had a habit of smoothing over cracks and reassuring the perfectionist Tarav that everything was going to be all right in the end.
   "Commander," Tarav replied gruffly. "Is the engineering work on schedule?"
   Right into the questioning, Amanda thought. I wasn't expecting the Spanish Inquisition. "It is. We expect to fit the replacement warp core tomorrow morning, weather permitting. Within three days we should be running on our own power instead of having to drain energy from the fusion reactors temporarily stored in our primary and secondary cargo bays." She paused a moment to swallow, her mouth a little dry. "Um, computer cores are installed and engaged in networkijng and Daystrom compatiability testing, the LCARS database should be fuilly installed and networked in by Tuesday. The new Bridge module arrives the same day... we also have ninety-two per cent of the new EPS system intact, the holodecks on deck six are being prepared, and the arboretum is being replanted. Deck twenty-one is being fitted out as a large recreation and relaxation area for the more aquatic and amphibious species aboard."
   Telev looked her up and down. "Only ninety-two per cent?"
   She nodded, feeling somewhat small. "The remaining eight per cent requires the new warp core installed to be fitted. Engineering crews expect it to be a maximum of one of your Twu'rai before the alterations are completed."
   The admiral smiled- genuinely- at Amanda's use of the Tellarite week, though Amanda had picked it up a few years earlier as a simple way of saying 'nine and a half Earth days'. "Only three days ahead of schedule."
   "Well, we could spend it arguing."
   "If only," Telev muttered at the mentiong of the Tellarite preferred pastime. "Your staff is assembling?"
   Amanda nodded. "We're still, as you'll be aware, yet to recieve a captain, and most of the senior staff is scheduled to arrive in the next few days. So far we've got Lieutenant Commander Crowson in engineering- they've been excused from shipboard functions during the refit-and these are Lieutenant Kemu Taril, our ship's asssistant counsellor, chief of Operations and the refit supervisor Threycus Pashtelli, Ensign Mahana Chandra, beta shift Communications, and Major Grace Dawson of the Marine Corps."
   "I see. I shall need to speak to you in your ship's briefing room, if you would show us the way."
   Amanda nodded, and began to lead the way.
   Oh Joy.

***
As you will be aware," Telev began, the officers and his group sat around the secondary briefing room's large, chevron-shaped table, "the majority of Starfleet's curent focus is on pacifying and mapping the Gamma Quadrant, with a view to eventually setting up a section of the Federation itself in the quadrant. This, of course, leaves a gap in the Federation's homeland protection.
   "Suffice to say, at present, our assets in the Alpha and Beta quadrants are somewhat limited. And with the Treaty of Bajor meaning free wormhole access to any Alpha-Beta quadrant power, internal policing is also an issue. As such, this vessel is being temporarily assigned to the Home Quadrant Fleet for a period of no more than six months before its mision in the Gamma Quadrant."
   Amanda sighed, realising that the hopes she'd had of going out for an exploration mission were dashed, at least for the moment.
   "I know this will come as a disappointment to several of you, but it is purely temporary, due to a lack of available vessels."
   "But sir," Chandra asked, "we're not built for combat. Sure, we have two platoons of marines on board, but most of the refit has focussed on sensory and communications capacity, as well as science labs."
   "I'm aware of that, but the sensor capacity is going to be your greatest asset. When engaged in anti-piracy and interdiction, you need a long reach."
   "So, we're what, sitting on the Klingon border until March in case someone tries something funny?"
   Telev nodded. "In the event that the border remains quiet, standard Federation primary mission parameters are to be followed. You ship out in ten days."
   Amanda nodded slowly. "Um, sir. One problem so far."
   Telev stared at her. "What?"
   "We... we don't yet have a transponder code to give the ship. At the moment we're simply 'Mothball One-one-five-eight-six."
   The diplomatic officer, a member of a species Chandra had identified as the Kyenthids, grinned, something Amanda didn't expect. "Actually, I can fix that. Kerra Varadike, by the way. I've been assigned as your contact specialist."
   "You could have told us!" Amanda chastised, but made it clear that the statement was mostly in jest. "Welcome aboard, Lieutenant Varadike, then. What was it you had to say?"
   "Well, on departure from Starbase Twelve, I was given the ship's transponder frequency and identifier codes, as well as the dedication plaque that they'd just forged. Bloody heavy thing, by the way."
   Chandra grinned. "Can we see it?"
   Kerra smiled, picking up the large carry-sack from the floor and putting it on the table, reaching in and extracting a large, rectangular bronze plate. "Ta-dah."
   On it, finally, the ship's name was made clear.
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« Reply #2 on: July 01, 2009, 03:51:01 PM »

    From the middle of the knot of assembled crew, Threycus smirked amiably, "So when is the christening party?".  Really, he didn't care much at all for what the ship was called, since it's primary duties were exploration, it's would by convention take a Terran name to match the mostly Terran crew.  Sure he could have served on one of the combat-oriented ships which tended to have more Andorian crews.  He could help more with the pacification and stabilization of the Gamma Quadrant, possibly on a re-activated Alaska class battlecruiser, Akita or perhaps even a Sovereign Battleship. The very thought made him shudder.   It wasn't that he was afraid of battle, he liked a good fight as much as the next Andorian.  But passions run deep and he didn't want to deal with that, plus he didn't have to work as hard on a Terran vessel.  And Terrans tended let their guard down much more at parties than his own people.  So many more opportunities to have some fun.

    He wrinkled his muzzle as he read the plague.  That didn't sound like the name of a famous Terran explorer and it certainly didn't sound like an explorer like "Intrepid", "Pathfinder" or "Discovery". 

    "Deliverance?   I thought our mission was exploration?  Isn't that a freighter's name?"   He wasn't going to say that unless asked directly, but curiosity won out.  He'd not asked or been given permission to speak freely, and for all he knew the admiral chose the name himself.   He didn't want to get on his bad side, He might end up getting put in charge of more projects or promoted and given more responsibilities.  Hopefully he might get a demotion...
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